zealotterror's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Extreme Russian Roulette]

Pretty good.

I liked the game, but when I was playing it, suddenly it was my turn all the time and it didnt matter what I did, my turn again. A bug perhaps? Nice job anyway!

jackson-buckwheat responds:

i'll look at this. it sounds weird, and i've never seen it while playtesting

[Tutorial: Mouse Avoider]

Dude...

I have been working on a mouse avoider game for a while now. Your tutorial wasn´t very good if you want to make good mouse avoider games. You could still "jump" over walls and enemies without right-clicking. And of course, rightclick cheat. And still, walls and enemies won´t be enough in a game like this if you don´t have good imagination.

Lotus-max responds:

i know of this, and there are ways to conquer the right click cheat.. which will be coverd in next part!.. oh yea and i ovbiosuly know making a game like this is gunna have a little trouble getting onto newgrounds. But its for your own plesure..

[Pokemon Quizz 1.4]

hehe

When you were supposed to write what that silly looking thing with arms name was i wrote "fuck you". Correct! You are a true pokemon master! Thats what it said. I don´t know its name, but I am pretty sure It´s not called fuck you...

Aprime responds:

lol, i added that two, im glad you found that, i was w8in for sum1 2

[ClockSmash v0.8]

hmmmmm...

The best in this movie is that you kill clocks! Besides of that it was pretty boring. But, I still notice that you worked with this (I don´t mean that you worked your ass off, just that it is serious) so I will vote 3.

Foreverkul responds:

Ok, thanks for the 3 :)

[Detailed RPG Tutorial]

GREAT!!!

But you didn´t explain load buttons, right? Could you please submit a second one with load buttons.

Hoeloe responds:

i did explain load buttons

[Factory of Fear]

good.

I came to the kitchen but couldn´t figure out what to do there. Please reply this review with an answer.

Bat-Company responds:

YOU CAN NOT WIN! She wins, the girl killes you at the end. You faint and die. You win if you die, that's the end. :-)
This ending might make a second 'factory of fears possible, but I do not know if I will do this. I'm very glad to see so much respons from you guys, thanks!

[Cartoon Dressup ver 1.1b]

A good one

But needs improvement. Do not make your buttons out of just text. Geez how many will I have to tell about that? I could barely press the buttons. Include like a square around the text to. Also, why were there only smiling mouths but only angry eyes????? And make your stop the sound button work.

Condix responds:

Yeah i know thats because its only a beta allright im gonna make the buttons so its easy to press the buttons there was not only angry eyes also happy eyes im gonna make more eyes clothes stuff backgrounds and so on=D thx

[Raker Escaper]

Pretty good actually.

It could be alot better! It was to hard, so make enemies easier or make like extralives for your character so that he needs to be killed three times or more to get game over. If there is something I am working on really hard to try to learn, then it´s action scripting. I know how to make, like own tamagotchis and so, but how to make enemies move around an attack, that is far away of my knowledge. I got impressed by your actionscrpiting. If you know any good actionscript tutorial with stuff like that I would really apprecieate if you mail me with links. It was a pretty good game.

DannyP responds:

I tried to make this game a decent challenge, I've made games in the past, and they were way too easy. Then I made one that was too hard (.:Escape:.), so this one's inbetween. I don't use tutorials, I learn from help files, or by combining actions to see if they work.
Thanks for reviewing

[GG - Dual_Glock Games]

Not great

Put more effort in your games. Just clicking on a butoon is not funny. Or fly with tom fulp i a small room. But a little more work and it might be good. Good menu with music selections is one of the few good things in this game.

Dual-Glock responds:

Thanks anyway

[Speedy Squares]

Buttons.

Don´t make you buttons just text. Make a white square around it and it will look like only text but react even if you press 1 cm away from the text. Besides that, good job.

jipjip responds:

thx for the review and suggestion!